Merge branch 'dz/connect-error-report'

diff --git a/Documentation/git-fetch-pack.txt b/Documentation/git-fetch-pack.txt
index e9952e82108d3a0fa209bc9d720fa1f1229310b4..ed1bdaacd10788ab35a2ae1de870d5972e30d432 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/git-fetch-pack.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-fetch-pack.txt
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@ git-fetch-pack - Receive missing objects from another repository
 
 SYNOPSIS
 --------
+[verse]
 'git fetch-pack' [--all] [--quiet|-q] [--keep|-k] [--thin] [--include-tag] [--upload-pack=<git-upload-pack>] [--depth=<n>] [--no-progress] [-v] [<host>:]<directory> [<refs>...]
 
 DESCRIPTION
@@ -18,7 +19,7 @@ higher level wrapper of this command, instead.
 Invokes 'git-upload-pack' on a possibly remote repository
 and asks it to send objects missing from this repository, to
 update the named heads.  The list of commits available locally
-is found out by scanning local $GIT_DIR/refs/ and sent to
+is found out by scanning the local refs/ hierarchy and sent to
 'git-upload-pack' running on the other end.
 
 This command degenerates to download everything to complete the
@@ -44,8 +45,8 @@ OPTIONS
        locked against repacking.
 
 --thin::
-       Spend extra cycles to minimize the number of objects to be sent.
-       Use it on slower connection.
+       Fetch a "thin" pack, which records objects in deltified form based
+       on objects not included in the pack to reduce network traffic.
 
 --include-tag::
        If the remote side supports it, annotated tags objects will
@@ -90,15 +91,6 @@ OPTIONS
        $GIT_DIR (e.g. "HEAD", "refs/heads/master").  When
        unspecified, update from all heads the remote side has.
 
-
-Author
-------
-Written by Linus Torvalds <torvalds@osdl.org>
-
-Documentation
---------------
-Documentation by Junio C Hamano.
-
 GIT
 ---
 Part of the linkgit:git[1] suite