Makes some cleanup/review in gittutorial

There are some different but little cleanup changes to fix some missing
quotes, to fix what seemed to be an unended sentence, to reident a
little paragraph with too large a sentence and fix a branch name that
was referred to twice later by another name.

Signed-off-by: Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo <cascardo@holoscopio.com>
Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>

diff --git a/Documentation/gittutorial.txt b/Documentation/gittutorial.txt
index c7fa949c287f76c5ab8173d975f6da3dd92e6802..cf0689cfeb8b5122f8fa20345d9f5307fee1cd6c 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/gittutorial.txt
+++ b/Documentation/gittutorial.txt
@@ -332,11 +332,11 @@ alice$ git log -p HEAD..FETCH_HEAD
 ------------------------------------------------
 
 This operation is safe even if Alice has uncommitted local changes.
 ------------------------------------------------
 
 This operation is safe even if Alice has uncommitted local changes.

-The range notation HEAD..FETCH_HEAD" means "show everything that is reachable
-from the FETCH_HEAD but exclude anything that is reachable from HEAD.
+The range notation "HEAD..FETCH_HEAD" means "show everything that is reachable
+from the FETCH_HEAD but exclude anything that is reachable from HEAD".

 Alice already knows everything that leads to her current state (HEAD),
 Alice already knows everything that leads to her current state (HEAD),

-and reviewing what Bob has in his state (FETCH_HEAD) that she has not
-seen with this command
+and reviews what Bob has in his state (FETCH_HEAD) that she has not
+seen with this command.

 
 If Alice wants to visualize what Bob did since their histories forked
 she can issue the following command:
 
 If Alice wants to visualize what Bob did since their histories forked
 she can issue the following command:


@@ -375,9 +375,9 @@ it easier:
 alice$ git remote add bob /home/bob/myrepo
 ------------------------------------------------
 
 alice$ git remote add bob /home/bob/myrepo
 ------------------------------------------------
 

-With this, Alice can perform the first part of the "pull" operation alone using the
-'git-fetch' command without merging them with her own branch,
-using:
+With this, Alice can perform the first part of the "pull" operation
+alone using the 'git-fetch' command without merging them with her own
+branch, using:

 
 -------------------------------------
 alice$ git fetch bob
 
 -------------------------------------
 alice$ git fetch bob


@@ -566,22 +566,22 @@ $ git log v2.5.. Makefile       # commits since v2.5 which modify
 
 You can also give 'git-log' a "range" of commits where the first is not
 necessarily an ancestor of the second; for example, if the tips of
 
 You can also give 'git-log' a "range" of commits where the first is not
 necessarily an ancestor of the second; for example, if the tips of

-the branches "stable-release" and "master" diverged from a common
+the branches "stable" and "master" diverged from a common

 commit some time ago, then
 
 -------------------------------------
 commit some time ago, then
 
 -------------------------------------

-$ git log stable..experimental
+$ git log stable..master

 -------------------------------------
 
 -------------------------------------
 

-will list commits made in the experimental branch but not in the
+will list commits made in the master branch but not in the

 stable branch, while
 
 -------------------------------------
 stable branch, while
 
 -------------------------------------

-$ git log experimental..stable
+$ git log master..stable

 -------------------------------------
 
 will show the list of commits made on the stable branch but not
 -------------------------------------
 
 will show the list of commits made on the stable branch but not

-the experimental branch.
+the master branch.

 
 The 'git-log' command has a weakness: it must present commits in a
 list.  When the history has lines of development that diverged and
 
 The 'git-log' command has a weakness: it must present commits in a
 list.  When the history has lines of development that diverged and