[english] finish plan for oral presentation

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 - <https://www.pm.gov.au/media/doorstop-interview-portsmouth-uk>
 - <https://www.afp.gov.au/news-media/media-releases/afp-statement-search-warrant-sydney>
 
 - <https://www.pm.gov.au/media/doorstop-interview-portsmouth-uk>
 - <https://www.afp.gov.au/news-media/media-releases/afp-statement-search-warrant-sydney>
 

-Journalist Information Warrant - allows access to restrained metadata
-AFP raid on ABC - June 2019
-- - "alleged publishing of information classified as an official secret"
+Journalist Information Warrant - allows access to restrained metadata  
+AFP raid on ABC - June 2019  
+"alleged publishing of information classified as an official secret"

 
 
 ## Articles
 
 
 
 ## Articles
 

-Ananian-Welsh. _Why the raids on Australian media present a clear threat to democracy_. https://theconversation.com/why-the-raids-on-australian-media-present-a-clear-threat-to-democracy-118334  
+Ananian-Welsh. _Why the raids on Australian media present a clear threat to democracy_. <https://theconversation.com/why-the-raids-on-australian-media-present-a-clear-threat-to-democracy-118334>  
+Ketchell, Misha. _The devil is in the detail of government bill to enable access to communications data_. <https://theconversation.com/the-devil-is-in-the-detail-of-government-bill-to-enable-access-to-communications-data-96909>  
+UNESCO. _World Trends in Freedom of Expression and Media Development_. 2018. <https://unesdoc.unesco.org/ark:/48223/pf0000261065>  
+Parker, Samuel. _‘Unwanted invaders’: The representation of refugees and asylum seekers in the UK and Australian print media_. March 2016. <http://orca.cf.ac.uk/79108/1/ESharp%20Article%20SP.pdf>  
+

 
 ## Structure
 
 
 ## Structure
 


@@ -25,7 +29,7 @@ Ananian-Welsh. _Why the raids on Australian media present a clear threat to demo
 Discuss context and recent developments
 
 - ABC raided on 5 June 2019 for "the Afghan files" report
 Discuss context and recent developments
 
 - ABC raided on 5 June 2019 for "the Afghan files" report

-- Leaked defence documents which revealed corruption, incl. killing of unarmed men and children (murder)
+- Leaked defence documents which revealed corruption, incl. killing of unarmed men and children (murder) - ethical appeal

 - Lyons (ABC exec. editor): "we waive no rights, and reserve the right to take injunction against the warrant"
 - Secrecy offences punishable by seven years imprisonment
 - AFP also searched Annikea Smethurt's house (not connected) - personal surveillance report
 - Lyons (ABC exec. editor): "we waive no rights, and reserve the right to take injunction against the warrant"
 - Secrecy offences punishable by seven years imprisonment
 - AFP also searched Annikea Smethurt's house (not connected) - personal surveillance report


@@ -33,6 +37,7 @@ Discuss context and recent developments
 - Importance & risk of public interest journalism
 
 **1. Importance of source confidentiality/protection**
 - Importance & risk of public interest journalism
 
 **1. Importance of source confidentiality/protection**

+

    - Ethical foundation of journalists
    - Enables individuals to share controversial/sensitive information with journalists without fear of persecution
    - International Convenant on Civil and Political Rights - <https://www2.ohchr.org/english/bodies/hrc/docs/gc34.pdf>
    - Ethical foundation of journalists
    - Enables individuals to share controversial/sensitive information with journalists without fear of persecution
    - International Convenant on Civil and Political Rights - <https://www2.ohchr.org/english/bodies/hrc/docs/gc34.pdf>


@@ -42,12 +47,20 @@ Discuss context and recent developments
    - Limited aid of encrypted messaging and internal protocols
 
 **2. Impact on democracy**
    - Limited aid of encrypted messaging and internal protocols
 
 **2. Impact on democracy**

+

    - AU has more national security laws than any other nation
    - AU has more national security laws than any other nation

-   - Only liberal democracy without Charter of Human Rights to protect media freedom
-   - 
+   - AU is the only liberal democracy without Charter of Human Rights to protect media freedom
+   - Democracy means everyone has the right to contribute to the choosing of their government. If the government is not portraying themselves honestly, how can we make an accurate decision?
+   - Analogy to control of media in Ukraine (no English media allowed), other communist states

 
 **3. Risk of bias**
 
 **3. Risk of bias**

-   - 
+
+   - Control of media could lead to more drastic censorship
+   - Society has a right to know the truth about the leadership of their country
+   - With censorship, journalists cannot do their job - their abilities are being stifled
+   - Media could slowly become taken over by the government, leading to further corruption ("slippery slope")
+   - Surveillance
+

 
 
 **Conclusion**
 
 
 **Conclusion**

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