From: Andrew Lorimer <andrew@lorimer.id.au>
Date: Thu, 21 Feb 2019 07:08:50 +0000 (+1100)
Subject: more essay notes
X-Git-Tag: yr12~245
X-Git-Url: https://git.lorimer.id.au/notes.git/diff_plain/1fd06969166bb4a18e36651fdf7a42a7769f49d4

more essay notes
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diff --git a/english/cold-blood.md b/english/cold-blood.md
index 8e62160..ddc015c 100644
--- a/english/cold-blood.md
+++ b/english/cold-blood.md
@@ -237,4 +237,14 @@ Transition between scenes:
 - shopping at Emporia, Kansas
 - foreshadowing
 - Perry's ego/selfishness
-- siphoning petrol
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+- **siphoning petrol**
+
+
+### Statement of Intention notes
+
+- symbolism of Herb and Kenyon introduction - foreshadowing
+- setting/choice of prompt - important time for setting up plot
+- hyphens/long sentences
+- rubber gloves - integration with original plot
+- guitar stolen - symoblism of Perry losing his freedom of expression
+- transition - walking/pacing metaphor (Capote's style)
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