From e3e096ec1d461aa6eade21a9e5435acd9eaf8c12 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andrew Lorimer <andrew@lorimer.id.au>
Date: Tue, 16 Oct 2018 09:38:10 +1100
Subject: [PATCH] MHR statement of intention & bibliography

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 english/persuasive-evidence.md |  9 ++++++
 english/persuasive-soi.md      | 14 ++++++++++
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+@misc{ wiki:xxx,
+    author = "{Wikipedia contributors}",
+    title = "Electronic health record --- {Wikipedia}{,} The Free Encyclopedia",
+    year = "2018",
+    howpublished = {\url{https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Electronic_health_record}},
+    note = "[Online; accessed 10-Oct-2018]"
+}
+
+@misc{conv1,
+  author = {Hunter, David},
+  year = {2018},
+  month = {08},
+  title = {Using My Health Record data for research could save lives, but we must ensure it’s ethical},
+  booktitle = {The Conversation},
+  howpublished = {\url{https://theconversation.com/using-my-health-record-data-for-research-could-save-lives-but-we-must-ensure-its-ethical-100757}}
+}
+
+@misc{conv2,
+  author = {Gillespie, Jim},
+  year = {2018},
+  month = {06},
+  title = {My Health Record: the case for opting in},
+  booktitle = {The Conversation},
+  howpublished = {\url{https://theconversation.com/my-health-record-the-case-for-opting-in-99850}}
+}
+
+@misc{eval,
+  author = {Siggins Miller},
+  year = {2016},
+  month = {11},
+  title = {Evaluation of the Participation Trials for
+  the My Health Record},
+  booktitle = {Australian Department of Health},
+  howpublished = {\url{https://www.health.gov.au/internet/main/publishing.nsf/content/A892B3781E14E1B3CA25810C000BF7C6/%24File/Evaluation-of-the-My-Health-Record-Participation-Trials-Report.pdf}}
+}
+
+@misc{legisl,
+  year = {2015},
+  month = {11},
+  title = {Health Legislation Amendment (eHealth) Act 2015},
+  booktitle = {Australian Federal Register of Legislation},
+  howpublished = {\url{https://www.legislation.gov.au/Details/C2015A00157}}
+}
+
+@misc{nbmphn,
+  year = {2015},
+  month = {11},
+  title = {NBMPHN: Learnings from the My Health Record Opt-Out Trial},
+  booktitle = {Nepean Blue Mountains Primary Health Network},
+  howpublished = {\url{https://www.nbmphn.com.au/getattachment/5e802003-8972-40cc-ad68-9eda354d3406/attachment.aspx}}
+}
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diff --git a/english/persuasive-evidence.md b/english/persuasive-evidence.md
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+# My Health Record - evidence
+
+- records stored 30 years after death
+- existed since July 2012
+- 6 million consumers registered (54% F, 46% M)
+- Blue Mountains trial (executive report, 2012)
+- - 15% -> 70% uptake with training
+- - cost is unclear
+- - "moving in the right direction" according to public
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+---
+ bibliography: persuasive-bib.bib
+ nocite: '@*'
+...
+
+# My Health Record - statement of intention
+
+My opinion essay is written in a style intended for a newspaper or website. I took the approach of a casual but informative discussion around My Health Record, and I was careful to thoroughly cover the background of the issue in order to lead readers to a logically sound conclusion.
+
+The concept of electronic health records has existed in theory for decades, however only now is it starting to be feasible in practice. I find this an interesting issue since it involves ethical debate as well as more practical problems with implementation. In my piece, I try to convey this passion and genuine interest in the issue without appearing emotionally swayed.
+
+In particular, the My Health Record was first posed as a possible solution to the perceived problems with the traditional decentralised system in 2010. It was then announced in 2012 as a trial program, and
+
+## Bibliography
diff --git a/english/persuasive.md b/english/persuasive.md
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 My opinion essay is written in a style intended for a newspaper or website. I took the approach of a casual but informative discussion around My Health Record, and I was careful to thoroughly cover the background of the issue in order to lead readers to a logically sound conclusion.
 
+The piece begins with a clear in
+
 
 ## Bibliography
 <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Electronic_health_record>  
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