doc: omit needless "for"
authorKristoffer Haugsbakk <kristoffer.haugsbakk@gmail.com>
Fri, 9 Dec 2016 15:51:12 +0000 (16:51 +0100)
committerJunio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
Fri, 9 Dec 2016 23:14:01 +0000 (15:14 -0800)
What was intended was perhaps "... plumbing does for you" ("you" added), but
simply omitting the word "for" is more terse and gets the intended point across
just as well, if not more so.

I originally went with the approach of writing "for you", but Junio C
Hamano suggested this approach instead.

Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <kristoffer.haugsbakk@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
index 72ca9c1ef1722797638af4c68b707d26489a389d..22309cfb48a6754d6bb4831cafc2981a8da7310b 100644 (file)
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ you want to understand Git's internals.
 The core Git is often called "plumbing", with the prettier user
 interfaces on top of it called "porcelain". You may not want to use the
 plumbing directly very often, but it can be good to know what the
-plumbing does for when the porcelain isn't flushing.
+plumbing does when the porcelain isn't flushing.
 
 Back when this document was originally written, many porcelain
 commands were shell scripts. For simplicity, it still uses them as