user-manual: minor editing for conciseness

Just cutting out a few unnecessary words.

Signed-off-by: J. Bruce Fields <bfields@citi.umich.edu>

diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
index 0331bad257e3a92a52ff29e17044495c4193ae9a..933177a38b75ab2b55c28f74cff3c7dc6894983b 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt
+++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
@@ -42,10 +42,9 @@ How to get a git repository
 It will be useful to have a git repository to experiment with as you
 read this manual.
 
 It will be useful to have a git repository to experiment with as you
 read this manual.
 

-The best way to get one is by using the gitlink:git-clone[1] command
-to download a copy of an existing repository for a project that you
-are interested in.  If you don't already have a project in mind, here
-are some interesting examples:
+The best way to get one is by using the gitlink:git-clone[1] command to
+download a copy of an existing repository.  If you don't already have a
+project in mind, here are some interesting examples:

 
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        # git itself (approx. 10MB download):
 
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        # git itself (approx. 10MB download):


@@ -63,9 +62,6 @@ directory, you will see that it contains a copy of the project files,
 together with a special top-level directory named ".git", which
 contains all the information about the history of the project.
 
 together with a special top-level directory named ".git", which
 contains all the information about the history of the project.
 

-In most of the following, examples will be taken from one of the two
-repositories above.
-

 [[how-to-check-out]]
 How to check out a different version of a project
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 [[how-to-check-out]]
 How to check out a different version of a project
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