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+# Persuasive essay
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+## My Health Record
+- federal government
+- digital copy of records
+- stored 30 years after death
+- not clinically reliable
+- e
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+**Benefits**
+- data use for research (with consent)
+- better communication between professionals
+
+
+**Risks**
+
+- reidentification
+- inclusion of genomic data
+- - system can be modified when this is approaching
+- innacuracy of data (not clinically reliable)
+- - not the only source of information
+- - MHR is not "removing" data
+- cost™