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@@ -237,4 +237,14 @@ Transition between scenes:
 - shopping at Emporia, Kansas
 - foreshadowing
 - Perry's ego/selfishness
 - shopping at Emporia, Kansas
 - foreshadowing
 - Perry's ego/selfishness

-- siphoning petrol
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+- **siphoning petrol**
+
+
+### Statement of Intention notes
+
+- symbolism of Herb and Kenyon introduction - foreshadowing
+- setting/choice of prompt - important time for setting up plot
+- hyphens/long sentences
+- rubber gloves - integration with original plot
+- guitar stolen - symoblism of Perry losing his freedom of expression
+- transition - walking/pacing metaphor (Capote's style)
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